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孩子英语作文得分低?六招帮你解决这个问题!

文章作者:益升英语在线培训 文章来源:益升英语在线培训 类型:行业资讯 日期:2018-06-26 17:23:03 分享:

最近很多家长都和益升教育反映说:自己孩子的英语作文得分低,孩子不是单词量不过关,但就是得分低。现在小编就问你们介绍六种方法,帮你孩子提高作文分!



孩子英语作文得分低?六招帮你解决这个问题!



1、灵活改变句子开头


在通常情况下,英语句子的排列方式为“主语+谓语+宾语”,即主语位于句子开头。


但若根据情况适当改变句子的开头方式,比如使用倒状语或以状语开头等,会使文章增强表现力。如:

(1) There stands an old temple at the top of the hill.


→ At the top of the hill there stands an old temple.


在小山顶上有一座古庙。


(2) You can do it well only in this way.


→ Only in this way can you do it well.


只有这样你才能把它做好。


(3) A young woman sat by the window.


→ By the window sat a young woman.


窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女。



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2、避免重复使用同一词语


为了使表达更生动,更富表现力,同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思,尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。


如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字,就会立刻想起like,事实上,英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多,如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。如:


I like reading while my brother likes watching television.


→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.


我喜欢看书,而我的兄弟却喜欢看电视。



3、合理使用省略句


合理恰当地使用省略句,不仅可以使文章精练、简洁,而且会使文章更具文采和可读性。如:


(1) He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?


→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?


他可能很忙,要是这样,我以后再来拜访。要是不忙,我现在可以见他吗?


(2) If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go.


→ If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not.


如果天气好,我们就去;如果天气不好,我们就不去了。


(3) She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.


→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.


她本可申请这份工作的,但她没有。



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4、适当运用非谓语结构


非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构,适当运用非谓语结构,会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。如:


(1) When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.


→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.


听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。


(2) As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.


→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.


由于不知道她的地址,我没法和她联系。


(3) As he was born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.


→ Born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.


他出生农民家庭,只上过两年学。





5、适当使用短语代替单词


(1) He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.


→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.


他已决定长大了当老师。


(2) He doesn’t like music.


→ He doesn’t care much for music.


他不大喜欢音乐。


(3) He told me that the question was now under discussion.


→ He told me that the question was now being discussed.


他告诉我问题现正正在讨论中。





6、适当使用名言警句点缀


在写作时根据实际情况恰当地用上一两句在英语培训机构学的名言警句来点缀文章,不仅使文章显得有深度、有智慧,而且会让文章在评分中上一个“得分档次”。如:


(1) As the proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Though you fail this time, you needn’t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.


俗话说,“坚持就是胜利。”虽然这次你失败了,但你不必失去信心。 只要你努力工作,坚持你的梦想,你就会有一天成功。


(2) There is a proverb goes like this “Life isn’t a bed of roses.” It is ture that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.


俗话说:“人生不可能永远一帆风顺”。人人都有可能遇到生活中的问题和困难。


(3) In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, “A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.”


现代社会,越来越多的人喜欢独居,但这对我们的生活并不好,我们需要结交朋友需要友谊。 俗话说,“远亲不如近邻”嘛。





益升教育建议各位家长可以给孩子多讲讲寓言故事,引导孩子多看书,学习里面的写作语法,这样作文才能高分哦!

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